Thanks for the feedback on last week's wolf piece. Will definitely work on the eyebrows on both the wolf and the dove to exagerate the expressions more. Great suggestion.
On another note I did some work on the piece below this week to see if I can finally finish up my book dummy and get it out there. Originally I had the wolf right outside Granny's bedroom window (bottom piece)and her resting comfortably in her bed unaware of her fate. In my updated version I've gotten rid of the window and added extra furnishings and have her more involved in the scene. In this later version she's actually calling out to Little Red thinking she's knocking at the door and her dove, Snowy, is tooting and screeching at the window frantic looking at the wolf face to face in the other room (last week's piece)! Let me know your thoughts they are always very helpful!!!
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